Sorry to say it, but you totally lost me after I‘ve encountered that -certain- part of this story, That just showed me an ignorance beyond believe but hopefully not purposefully evil approach towards certain real situations. I hope your ignorance will mature in the future and that you might recognize your errors. If you don‘t know what I am talking about, than there is hope for you (otherwise you purposely are evil)

So, after I said that, I can tell you, that I enjoyed this Story, till that obvious point I couldn‘t read thus anymore. It wasn‘t absolutely badly written and sometimes quite fun to read. Hope you write more in the future, child

If only there was a 2nd Epilogue. Would've been quite interesting to see what happened after spyro was crowned king.

Not a bad ending, but you still forgotten something. Nonetheless I have read books that are, up more appropriate. I still know that mistakes have been made. I ask you this, how many times did you write each chapter? From a writer to writer, rewriting each chapter makes it better. Here's another piece of advice listen to music while you write, it helps. The reason why is that song and story's are the same.

wait his drognflyparents did that that had to be fun

No spyro and cynder lemon as king and queen and what hapend to cynder?

Good job at righting the story

I didn't notice a single edit I thought it was a great story and you are pretty good at righting story's

To be completely honest I loved it... until chapter 29 I mean it just got dark and well kinda got ruined but I enjoyed it for most of the time keep up the good work

Honestly, when I read the first few chapters I thought it would just be another sex fanfic with a crap plot. but as it progressed it became better and better and I can honestly say I'm very impressed with how to plot formed and the amount of detail increased as you neared the ending. This is an excellent story and I would love to see more from you. Good luck with your future writing.

Here's some blunt harsh criticism.

This part seemd to last longer the first time I read this.

Wow that was really something and I mean that in a good way.

HaHA

That was certanly... shoking.

Still loven this.