To be honest, if I had to pick any one character to have my back, it would be 'WOKE' Haruhi. I really enjoyed this story, especially the reveal, which was perfect, but the very ending was a little disappointing, but that's just me. I still think 'The Coin' is my favorite fic in terms of self-aware haruhi, as you put it. I mean, there is nothing quite as awesome as seeing the entire data integrated thought entity confined to a pocket dimension inside of a marble. Now THAT is what I call a trump card. But sidetracks aside, this was a fantastic fic.

Such an amazing and well thought story, with characters showing unexcpected side, especially Asahina, Haruhi and Fujiwara. I sort of wish it had a sequel, but...

Not much to say, but thanks for the wonderful story. I enjoyed it a lot.

This is truly a fantastic story. One of the best one's for this fandom. Felt little (overstatement) to no dissatisfaction after it was all wrapped up.

Well, that was a nice ride! All is well if it ends well!

Still, Kyon suffered a lot in this... Still a damn good Story! Good job!

Poor kyon...

That's it, that's the review of this: Poor Kyon...

This story is quite possibly the best Haruhi Suzumiya story I have ever read. Thank you so much for creating this and capturing the character's personalities so perfectly. I loved this story every bit of the way! Great job. :)

Wow, great story. I have absolutely no criticisms for this. The spelling and grammar was flawless, everyone (especially Kyon) was in character, and the style is just like that of the novels. This is the kind of story that deserves to be on any Haruhi fan's favorites list.

WTF! O-O

This chapter was pretty intense, I wonder if it's possible to settle this without informing Haruhi of her powers? Or talking about time travel?

I guess I'll see that by reading the rest :).

Well, at this point it must seem like I really love torturing Kyon. But hopefully this hasn't been too over the top for anyone to stomach.

Actually yeah, its way over the top, not only does Haruhi breaks up with him, but from what I saw in this chapter, even when they were in a relationship, it never went past a master/slave relationship that they decided to call romance, it seems Haruhi is still treating him the same, did nothing change when they were dating? was Kyon still bending over every whim of Haruhi? And then you decided to send Mikuru to the future? now thats just cruel

Excelent. I liked your Asahina (big), she was a great vilan. The way Asakura interacted with Kyon was humourous. Haruhi's assention was extreamly well done.

Fantastic and incredibly realistic story. You wrote out all of the characters really well. Well, simply put, this is certainly one of the better, if not best, TMoSH fanfics around. :D

Ah, classic Big Damn Heroes moment. Btw, you haven't happen to read/watched Fate Stay Night, have you (although the fact that you are a troper raises that likelihood to at least 61%). Also, I forgot to mention: I find your version of Kuyoh strangely moe. I wish that Fujiwara would make a Heel Face Turn or at least not terminated.

Oh god, oh god, ohgod ohgod ohgod, this fic is spiralling into a crazy fit of So Cool It's Awesome. TIF is one of the coolest stuff I read in this fic and Fujiwara, you said that he was wearing a coat, right? So, would that qualify for Badass Longcoat? I'm not sorry for only talking about Fujiwara. You have only yourself to blame for making him so badass (well you do have my apologies if I'm part of a Misaimed Fandom :/ )