Nice

Fantastic. Thank you very much for sharing.

Loved it

Artemis's brow creased. "What do you mean? It's a millennia-old myth, Holly."

A smiled quirked her lips. "Didn't you know? Cupid was my great-grandfather." And then Holly was shielded and off into the sky before he could say another word.

Artemis was never certain whether or not she was in earnest.

You'd think after Santa being real Artemis would have more faith ;)

"O ye of little faith," he quipped.
Ah ha! I knew it!

I really like how you're taking the "Artemis having magic" direction here.

Go Butler, ship them like you've never shipped before!

"A quotation?" Artemis had asked, turning to Holly.

"A proverb." She hadn't told him where the proverb originated and, luckily, there hadn't been time for him to press her.

I call BS that Artemis wouldn't know the Bible, it's a pretty famous book for a reason.
But, I shall handwave it for the sake of the story.

Maybe Cupid was an elf who was really skilled at hooking people up? XD I want to believe that it's true, and that he really IS her grandfather, lol.

What can I say? This story was so romantic, extremely well-written, and truly captivating and spell-binding.

Hmm, a tryst during Beltain? It will be truly... *puts sunglasses on* magical.

*is shot*

Seriously though... this is very, very touching, and beautiful.

Great minds think alike, eh? I was struck by the resemblance here and wondered if one of you had read the other's work beforehand ;)

Ahhh, your dialogue is excellent. I can hear all the characters perfectly in my head

Pretty good. The confession was a bit cheesy but you "Fowled it up" well enough. And clever to pull Holly's great grandfather into this at the end, rather than a forced rom-com "i love you" ending. An Arteriffic 9/10

Great story.

And thank you so much for two things: 1) Keeping Artemis normal. Too many fics make him into some sort of greek god suddenly. No! He is a slightly unhealthy-looking, pale and scrawny (or at the very least skinny) man.

And 2) Remembering the size difference and keeping their first kisses and intimacy somewhat clumsy. That is how it should be. Much as he isn't a greek god, Artemis isn't an experienced lover. He might be enthusiastic and a quick learner, but he can't be a perfect lover on the first try and his lack of stamina and motor skills might get in the way of his growth.

He, this is great. You write the characters brilliantly.