Well, the idea was interesting, but it definitely could have used some editing for spelling, grammar, and formatting issues. And things jump way too rapidly between scenes in the last two chapters. But this story is almost two decades old, so I won't be too harsh on it.

*Blood erupts violently from mouth, nose, eyes and ears as I collapse into my desk and stubbornly look up before giving a disturbingly enthusiastic thumbs-up* Brilliant...! We're both on the same wavelength! The only other writer I've had so many matching expectations and plot ideas with is Kyugan! I've had a Digimon story with a similar concept in reserve for ages because I couldn't continue it and it's VERY similar to this!

The main differences being mine takes place after Digimon Tamers and I was going to extend the story into possibly Digimon Adventures with a flip so that it was like the Digital World wasn't just an alternate world of data it was parallel to all other worlds similar to ours so over time Takato and the other D3 Tamers would've participated in each of the series.

It starts with Takato JUST after the D3 series ending teaser where he finds the Digital portal under Guilmon's shack where an unknown force renders him unconscious and he's dragged in where he wakes up as a ChaosGallantmon; apparently thanks to Dobermon's sacrifice not only were the Tamers able to fusion Digivolve in the real world the fact was they were turned into data as well and because of the nature of the fusion Digivolution they ended up with all the "dark" or "evil" data.

Shortly after receiving psychic orders to break a piece off one of the Destiny Stones and meet up with an unknown operative Takato does so while ending up dueling Gallantmon who was fully evolved using pieces of Takato's remaining data is heavily disturbed to have to fight his best friend, it goes from there but not very far before I hit BLOCK

Anyway I like your thinking and the thinking of those others who helped you come up with this.

This is great! And it's complete!

I'm liking the story so far.

Ok then that works... Um, won't that change make a paradox that destroys everything? I sort of think that digimorph stories are funny, but this one was weird in a good way. So does life go on like the problem never happened, or does a paradox destroy everything? Oh well, no harm no fowl.

Great story, but I agree with the others - watch your spelling.

e.g. Chapter 1 - Other side of the FEANCE (think you mean fence)

Other than that, an excellent story. Think I'll add it to my c2...

Good Idea, spelling, and grammer could use work on...
example:
sweet - candy, sugar
sweat - perspiration, salty liquid that you give off when hot
The Daikari I'm not really a big fan of but I can read it all the same... since there were a few hints in the show...

Interesting, but strange ending, at least it was happy

hee, good stuff. Keep up the great work

Ending is a little abrupt, but it's a firm one anyway. Awesome fic overall.

that was a great fic. i like the flashback bit at the end. thanx!

very good history dude!

like i say in my country, Chile:

te pasaste eres increible

) keep writing you are good doing it dude.

That was beautiful!

Umm...I've run out good things to say. _; Heh heh. Keep goin.

Please keep goin. I'm lovin it. The season 3 version too, I love that even more!