Great fanfiction! Greaaat! I'm curious about reading your other BOF2-related stories but I'm a Ryu/Nina junkie and I'm not sure whether you add romance in them or not. Either way, great job here!

I think this is a brilliant and wonderful backstory to Nina of BoF2. You did a good job of filling in the plot holes to her story and the possibility of her meeting Ryu and Bow as a child was also very intriguing. I'm surprised you only got two reviews; I thought your fic was a masterpiece. Anyway, I look forward to reading more from you.

I think it's a good start! I'm not a good person to ask about grammar, though...that's why I have three or so beta readers. Sorry! Your writing is extremely good considering english is not your native language )

This is cool. I like it. Keep writing. :)