Yeah, Neji really did talk a lot of shit to the one genin who could defeat him most easily. Really relied on her good nature to win that fight. Doesn't make sense in hindsight, unless he was trying to provoke her.
And I don't get why more ff authors don't at least mention this in their renditions of this fight. It makes Neji look like such a hypocrite, even if he was ultimately proven correct about fate and birth.

Aww, I am loving this. If this had happened, Neji would hate the main house even more than he already does. If Hinata lost, the elders would be mad at her, and Neji for beating her.

beautifully done

Really interesting story. It's something I wondered about as well. If Hinata wasn't as kind as she is, she could have easily used the curse seal on Neji, and I think Neji knew it in the back of his head in the Naruto canon.

Wow, i really hope you'll decide to take up this story again, it's really interesting:)
Let inspiration come to you;)
Good luck!

This was really good please write more for this story!

Omg please write more! I love this fic and believe it or not it's one of my favorites!

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I liked it! Poor Neji and Hinata. But mainly Neji... Good job!

-I like this story so 's an interesting concept and the characterization is good.i'm following this story,i can't wait to see what happens next

still waiting for chapter 3! ;D

Hi! me again! PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING. I meant to keep my promise on reviewing everyday, but the stupid system didn't let me do it more than once per chapter when logged in... but anyway KEEP WRITING

me again! still love this! keep writing! (One hint of advice: using "being words" (been, had been, having been, etc.) makes a story sound bland and in the past. Go reread a chapter or so in one of your favorite books. You'll probably notice that the story is all in the present, and doesn't really have many "being words". To really intrigue readers, write your stories in the present tense, so they feel like they are a part of it! :)also, before you submit your story, proof check it, search for "being words" and try to replace them with the present tense. (ex: she had been walking when she had noticed the boy... She was walking when she noticed the boy) I know that it's pretty difficult to change to the present when the story is written in 3rd person, which is why it's meant for 1st person stories, but the story will sound more exciting by eliminating ~85% of these "filler words") :) Just a bit of advice, I hope it didn't sound mean! Keep writing pleaseeeeeeeeeee! Otherwise, I'll just keep badgering you!

PLEASE KEEP WRITING. I will literally review this story everyday until you write more.

ITS AMAZING PLZ CONTINUE!