Huh, I thought spinal injuries caused paralysis, ah well. It's still a VERY good story!

this was really good, and well written.

Kenny McLaggen - i noticed this because i wrote about a McLaggen son, but called him Ben :)

Aw...that's pretty sweet.

That was so good! I loved your writing! There no akwardly worded sentencesor anything! Loved it.

And I thought the end was sweet. :)