Love It!

Great twist.

Good story and too short, Need more of how they made their get away when she was shot and told she could not have children and how Charlie fits in agreement to their life of crime. Thank you and I enjoyed every bit bit your story.

Intriguing

I really love this story. You did incredible on it.

that was the most informative short mob story i have ever read.

Omg loved it.

:) loved this

Loved this one shot. Didn't know existed until I seen the banner.

Very good.

This is a great one

I liked that one! Loved that Charlie was in on it. Loved his world map of all the places they have been to. Love that hey had two children. This was great. What place did you get for this one?
Christy

Awww. I love happy endings! :)
It's great to hear that they had kids too. I only wish you would continue this! So good.
Thanks for sharing. :)

I enjoyed reading this.

Yes, as you can see I can't help but go through the other stories you've written. I guess the chief is in on Edward and Bella?

Oh my goodness this was so fantastic. I LOVEDDDD IT! Holy cow that was good! I'm kinda sad it's just a one shot, imagine what it would have been like as a full story- No wait. It was perfect the way it was. I think it had just the right about of fluff and information and detail and EVERYTHING. It was just SOOO good. I love old heist stories like this. I think those are always my favorite to read. So this was absolutely perfect. GREAT JOB! LOVE LOVE LOVE! And your writing was just fantastic too! Gosh I'm just ranting about how great it was now... but yeah. Great job! _