This was especially beautiful, and I absolutely adored your characterization of Fai. My boi I was sad when he started crying but it wasn't such a long scene so that's good. And Kuro-rin is also very adorably protective :D 33

I'm so glad they get together in every world. Perfect. Thanks for this!

Protective Kurogane is my weakness...but I hurt when Fai gets hurt. Why does my brain contradict itself. Well done!

Love this! These chapters are perfect!

*fangirl squeal*

PERFECT AGAIN

HOW DO YOU DO THIS?

THIS IS PERFECTION

"I'm the toughest pony in all of Pony Land and I'm looking for challengers." That made me laugh so much.

It matches perfectly Kurogane being an earth pony and Fai a boy flutter pony.
"We'll go monster hunting together!" So cute w

OMG

You know you really ship way too much your OTP when you now start shipping a cutting board and a steak knife lol I LOVE IT
THIS IS EVERYTHING I DIDN'T KNOW I NEEDED IN MY LIFE

Now my cutting board will be called Fai and my steak knife Kurogane D:
I imagined all the kitchen utensils gathering around two knifes fighting and it's too great lol

"Kuro-slice!"
I love this way too much

AGHSJDGAKHDGAKGAKFGAKGDK

All this fic is so cute but this chapter in particular is so so so beautiful TTwTT It made me go all zjhclzhvlzhvlzhvzlhvzlhzsdjfgak. I love every sentence of it ; w ; And the end! I felt so fluttery when Kuro-rin said they had to hurry or they'll miss the plane. It only made me love it even more that I fancy detective & thief stories, and with so much fluff.

I'll marry this chapter.

I loved all of those stories! For a minute there I was worried about Kuro-puppy but I'm glad that worked out. It was super creative when you did the Disney ones. I loved the cutting board and knife! It was so cute! You are amazingly creative!

And... now I'm at the end. Good read!

This was a pretty interesting world-crossover. It could turn into a larger story.

This is hilarious. I've seen one other fanfic where a stork delivers a kurofai baby, and I just love the idea so much. Thank you for writing.

I love this fic ! PLEASE POST MORE

This is one story I wouldn't mind holding my breath for. Each chapter is definitely enough to keep a reader satisfied. I'd really love to see this as a completed story though. :-)

Woaaah man, I truly loved this!
Every one of them, I mean. Every one, seriously.
You manage to write a little piece of perfection for each of them... I couldn't stop reading and I finished the fic in one round lol.
I can't tell you better how I think about this... Sorry but I can read english almost perfectly, but when I have to write is a catastrophe :P
Anyways, it's all about love and feels... and now my head is totally blank ;D
Thank you for writing this... it's been such a pleasure to read!
Great job :)