It's awesome and I like it.. but I was expecting the actual scenes of you-know-what.. hahah.. But it's still great and it really became slightly sad at the end for Zidane.. aww

other than the suggestive content... change 'em to regular actor's(ess) and u could do a teen fluff fic.

Absolutely brilliant; way better than I thought it would be! Keep it up! :)

I actually think this is a fantastic idea :D But, it's a bit rushed. Oh, well... I still enjoyed it nonetheless *inserts heart*

Oh! And sorry for the very late review. Just found it today.

xD very funny idea, I liked it! Great job.

Surprisingly sweet and lovely. Nice job.

Blood Lady

Only you could write a porn fic without an actual sex scene in it. xD

Nice AU fic, everyone is pretty much in character. I mean, Baku kinda isn't, but, y'know...he wasn't dying in the game. xP

I'm so in love with you. Like, seriously.

Only you could take the concept of Zidane/Dagger porn and make it legitimately sweet and fluffy. Like, marshmallows. This is marshmallow porn. And it's awesome. 3

Yay!