Loved every bit of this story. Thank you so much.

Thank you what a really good read this was. Made me feel happy.

Oh so sweet thanks for very good read

"An annoyingly cute sleepily amused kind of way."
Great line.

This story is perfect. I loved :)

wow wow wow wow... i don't know what else to say. This was an amazing story. You kept my attention the whole way through. Seriously. I didn't even start watching The Mentalist while i was reading (which is what i like to do, especially season 3)! Keep up stories like this. And i was very upset for this one to end, but you finished it nicely. Please write more team stories like this that focus on Jisbon... and make sure to add in Jadie and Alex. I like them. They are good OCs. :)

Made me smile... good work!

Definitely catching my attention. I like Alex. She seems cool and Lisbon deserves a childhood friend like her. :)

WOW! I've read a lot (and I mean a lot, I'm pretty sure my favourites list is over 800) of great stories on this site but I have to say I think this is one if the best! A few spelling/grammar mistakes but doesn't everyone? Anyway, I thought it was really great, if you're still on the site (not many mentalist writers are) PLEASE keep writing! Xx :)

SMILES CREEPILY

Nice, love the ending!

so a cute and very hot from chapter 12 to chapter 14 and very funny when Alex call Lisbon in the morning

I like your story really much!
Its great on different toppics...
i like that alex-thing really much, cause lisbon has someone to talk to :)
you've done really good.
3

So r like the other members of the gang going to walk in on them?

Cuz that would be pretty funny.

Really enjoyed this :D