I’m not gonna lie I’m real sad that this hasn’t been updated in forever I wanted to see how this one ended so bad

i like a girly ichigo as much as a sassy ichigo wonderful story

Hey :) this is just a small ignorable comment
To the first chapter. You know, I really really love Yaoi and especially Grimmichi.
But I must say that Ichigo acts like a small inncocent girl who can't do anything and Grimmjow like a gentlemen. It is completely OOC, I mean, Ichigo kicks Aizens and even Grimmjows ass, he is strong! And Grimmjow is the complete opposite of Ichigo who would try to kill Ichigo if he would cry because he thought that he was stronger. Ichigo is NOT a small girl.
Besides that, I really really like your writing style :) again, this is no flaming but a try of some critic. I hope you will continue writing!

Fuck you all yaoi fans. Because of you guys, many good fictions are being spoiled and are not gaining its actual credit. Mainly this grimmjow ichigo thing, you all have spreaded. Does ichigo or grimmjow look or act like gays? Please consider as a normal Homo sapiens though you all have the mind of a Dryopithecus africanus.

Theres no picture

I had to read this chapter again because everything seems to be happening so fast. Are things movin quicker with Ishida or are you just skipping days? I'm really into this story!
I feel so bad for Ichi-kun! Aizen really is an asshole! I'm happy that he's dead! What happened to the eighth Espada? Please! Update soon! :*}

I did not see this coming. I mean. Yes, I thought it was bad but, I didn't think that it would be this horrible! Poor Ichi! Good for Aizen! I'm glad that grimm killed him!
Jesus! How did you manage to write this chapter?
Update! Update! Update!

OMG! I thought it was dark before! What happened to Ichigo?!

It's like this story took an unexpected turn. It suddenly got really dark but, I am so excited for the coming chapters!

Oh my... Poor ichi...yeah...i'm strong, but...wow...that was defiantoy unexpected yet still expected...very well written! :) I couldn't bare to read into it... May be when i feel up to the challenge... :'( poor ichi

When you say a voice is "horse" it is actually spelled hoarse. Horse is the animal. Otherwise I love this story (even though the thing with Ichigo was disturbing) and you do a great job with the language so no big worries there.

So Ulquiorra betrays Aizen? Guess it's because he has feeling towards Ichigo. The false hope Aizen showed to Ichigo is the most effective torture in my opinion. Anyway, I found some type when Grimmjow went to Kisuke to look for Ichigo. You mentioned Ulquiorra and Aizen while I believe it's supposed to be Kisuke/Urahara. As gore as it is, I love this chapter 3

h-holy shit...
UPDATE SOON ERMAHGAWD YA CAN'T JUS' END IT THERE!

This chapter was really good! We got to see just how manipulative Aizen really is. But Im really glad the real Grimmjow got there in the end. Great work!

Nooooo! Ichiiii, even knowing he lives it pulls on the heart strings. Great chapter