I loved this. Wonderful :)

I came across a link to this story, quite by accident, on the old Sarah Connor Chronicles wiki. At first i was going to save the link and read it later, but I got drawn into your story. You've got a way with capturing the emotion of the characters and painting a compelling story. I'm pleased to have discovered it.

This story is freaking fantastic! I really love it! You definately captured the conundrum that is Kyle's life. loved it!

wow. that was very powerful. and completely in character. good writing!

Hey there little guy ..if only John heard that D

In the end, there were only four people who knew John Connor’s father.

And three of them were dead.

Nobody spoke of John Connor’s father.

honestly this was the best one-shot I've ever read and i read billions of them..

That was amazing.

I really liked this story.

That was truly touching & heartfelt. Great emotion put into everything.

Loved every bit of it.

You should write more. )