I have read many fanfics but none as good as this one ! U did a really good job ! The story is very original! Congratulations on such good work..!

Why would Alice still be stuck on the whole "vampires can't have children" issue after Bella had already explained that her children were half-vampires?

So Lillian is as stubborn as her namesake?

Did she Lillian after rose? Will she get along with rose?

this was a great story

Hi, I really like your story

This was a super cute story! Your English was very understandable and your grasp of grammer better then many others here on Fanfiction that speak English natively. There were mistakes, but I found them endearing. Thank you for sharing your story and the effort involved in writing in a second language!

All the mistakes! Makes this impossible to enjoy!

First off, spelling and grammar is important because too many mistakes and your characters start to sound like inbred idiots. Which your Bella does! Second, 4 year olds wouldn't remember and hound their mother about a couple people she met at the store. And that whole, I'm not healed shit is played the fuck out don't you think? Bella is embarrassingly emotionally retarded.

How convienant for Bella that right when she needed help BAM a vegaterian vampire showed up!...seriously?
Well I can tell this story is gonna suck

I love reading this over and over again.

wow! this story is really great (: thank you!

Tell ARO to hurry up.

run

Thank you