Reviews for The One Inbetween |
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Me chapter 5 . 5/28/2013 Ahhhhh such a good story! Please continue it! |
BakemonoShoujo chapter 5 . 4/4/2013 It's very good :D I really like it! |
gohagosa100 chapter 4 . 7/21/2012 This is the first time I felt that Goku was being a jerk... |
gohagosa100 chapter 2 . 7/21/2012 Sanzo is nice guy to Goku! He's not all irritated and has those issues! Hooray! |
gohagosa100 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012 First chapter and were already in lemons? Oh my god that's just beautiful! |
gohagosa100 chapter 3 . 7/21/2012 Awww sanzo you're awesome! |
gohagosa100 chapter 5 . 7/20/2012 Wait is it finished or something? I hope not! |
azab chapter 5 . 5/8/2011 i loved it a lot and i hope you update soooon and i hope to see seiten and can't Waite for homura to know the truth |
azab chapter 4 . 5/8/2011 i loved it a lot and does Sanzo remember the journey? |
azab chapter 3 . 5/8/2011 i loved it a lot and why does sanzo love Goku ? |
azab chapter 2 . 5/8/2011 i loved it a lot but does Sanzo know Goku? |
azab chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 i loved it a lot and i wonder what will happen and goku is really an idiot no one goes to strangers houses |
zmajoljupka chapter 1 . 11/12/2010 Hi! Your story is very interesting and very intense. I love the cliff hanger ending (ch 5) which makes me all the more excited about the next chapter. I have to mention two things that have bothered me thought. The first is that you've made Goku far too young for such a relationship,I can't help but find it somewhat disturbing that he's 14/15. Two, I find there is a lack of background, as in why does Sanzo want Goku if Goku obviously knows nothing about the Saiyuki world (while we have hints that H&S do have some memories)? Take these simply as my oppinions, no flames intended; you're a good writer and keep going :) |
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 5 . 7/28/2010 omg omg omg omg UPDATE! |
Nooooo.Oneeeee chapter 5 . 6/4/2010 nuu...-.- hohohoho go to hell Homura xP he better not come betweeen Sanzo and Goku e.e or else i'm gonna kill you xD xP jks jks lol UPDATE PRETTY PLEASE _ |