Reviews for The One Inbetween
Me chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
Ahhhhh such a good story! Please continue it!
BakemonoShoujo chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
It's very good :D I really like it!
gohagosa100 chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
This is the first time I felt that Goku was being a jerk...
gohagosa100 chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
Sanzo is nice guy to Goku! He's not all irritated and has those issues! Hooray!
gohagosa100 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
First chapter and were already in lemons? Oh my god that's just beautiful!
gohagosa100 chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
Awww sanzo you're awesome!
gohagosa100 chapter 5 . 7/20/2012
Wait is it finished or something? I hope not!
azab chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
i loved it a lot and i hope you update soooon and i hope to see seiten and can't Waite for homura to know the truth
azab chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
i loved it a lot and does Sanzo remember the journey?
azab chapter 3 . 5/8/2011
i loved it a lot and why does sanzo love Goku ?
azab chapter 2 . 5/8/2011
i loved it a lot but does Sanzo know Goku?
azab chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i loved it a lot

and i wonder what will happen and

goku is really an idiot no one goes to strangers houses
zmajoljupka chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Hi! Your story is very interesting and very intense. I love the cliff hanger ending (ch 5) which makes me all the more excited about the next chapter.

I have to mention two things that have bothered me thought.

The first is that you've made Goku far too young for such a relationship,I can't help but find it somewhat disturbing that he's 14/15.

Two, I find there is a lack of background, as in why does Sanzo want Goku if Goku obviously knows nothing about the Saiyuki world (while we have hints that H&S do have some memories)?

Take these simply as my oppinions, no flames intended; you're a good writer and keep going :)
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
omg omg omg omg

UPDATE!
Nooooo.Oneeeee chapter 5 . 6/4/2010
nuu...-.- hohohoho go to hell Homura xP he better not come betweeen Sanzo and Goku e.e or else i'm gonna kill you xD xP jks jks

lol UPDATE PRETTY PLEASE _
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