wow... this is absolutely amazing.I shed some tears there at the end. I am truly at a loss for words. I love how this really captured what Raph would feel like if he ever did get sick like this. Definitely going on my favorites!

that was so had emotion,love,caring,drama,AND grammar! that was priceless i tell ya!

*sobs* D:

Lovely story. The transition from fear to depression then to acceptance was very well depicted. The LeoRaph moment was especially touching. It was hard not to shed a tear or two since I was at work reading this :(

This is beautiful.

wow estoy sin palabras, que buen fanfic, te felicito

Wow, that was so very sad. It takes a lot to put tears in my eyes, but this did so. I don't think this is really overdone, plus, you did it in a way that just felt very poetic. Not many people can do that. Also, you treated the decline of the body due to cancer very well. Just enough detail, but not too much. Well done!

*sniff* Not crying... I'm NOT crying... really. *sniff*

Aww, that was so sad! Poor Raph! :(

It was beautifully written, I loved it. I loved the fact that Raphael didn't think he had lived life the way he should, but when he found out he had cancer, he started looking at life differently.

Also, the ending where you see the more soft side of Raph - that was really good. Also the part where you see the relationship between Leo and Raph.

You did a really great job! I'll add it to my favorites!