I love this (and the musical Urinetown, it was my school's fall production)! You got Little Becky Two Shoes' characterization just right, but Soupy Sue is the one who's pregnant, not Little Becky Two Shoes (wow her name is long!). Just thought I'd point that out.

As Lockstock would say, "(bad news, bad news, death, dying, Urinetown is death, what do you mean by metaphysical?, keep your head out of the clouds,don't be the bunny, I love the people of this town, more bad news, everyone dies at the end, the world has reached the apocalypse) Have a good day!"

Urinetown fan fictions just don't get enough glory.

Am I right? This is the first Urinetown fic.

And may I say,

Glorious job.

Absolutely phenomenal.

Yes, the world need more Urinetown fanfiction! Great job. :)

Thanks for writing this! I'm playing Josephine in an upcoming show, and I was planning to write some fic to get into character, but you already did, so I don't have to. :-) Well done!