"A couple of friends ( of which none are female)".

Ayame from Ichiraku Ramen would like a word with you.

deberias continuarlo esta genial

Man I’m enjoying dis booook

Un naïf c'était que Naruto ne pourrai pas le devenir.

I'll be honest I'm glad for what Jiraya did for Naruto because he is right considering all the females he met on his adventures. Koyuki, Shion, Shizuka etc. Lot of good women right there who actually appreciate him and could definitely lead to more.

P.S. Hinata doesn't count she was just a plain stalker in my eyes who had to watch Naruto to build up her confidence. Which is stupid she should've just gotten stronger to build up her confidence instead of stalking Naruto all the time bring it down or lose whatever confidence she has when he just says hi. It's stupid.

Can We PLEASE get an update :)

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You did a good job but getting Jiraiya and Naruto the life and the store is very believable it sounds like something I would have told him so I thank you for that also it's not too many fanfics that do that and please when you continue the right there's no military lingo because it takes people out of the story there's another told there is no military referencing accepting the 4th Shinobi War ninjas of the Hidden Villages are Mercenaries not military and I thank you for not turning and please no make it lemons in the story if any fanfic ask for tell them that's not going to happen if they don't like it tell him to find another piece of material the read when you make a lemon you just disrespect the characters you write about I know I might sound like an old man when I talk about this but to me it's unnecessary people want that because they want to see pornography they want to be done then they're in the wrong section so please if you do have romance and intimacy between shizune and Naruto make sure there are no lemons but it's disrespectful to the characters that you write about let people use their imaginations that's all you need to do anyone ask you to put 11 tell him to grow up and seek help I like your story I like the way you wrote and I look forward to reading more thank you for this beautiful story it's nice to see someone right close to Naruto's OC also try to keep him as close to the enemy Naruto member of the quote never told nagato Uzumaki after the fight if the hero changes does the story change as well just remember that if he's not sound like Naruto act like Naruto is he still in Naruto I find a some time teenagers often tend the right now to the be cool because they think they're not at all and that's lame so again thank you for the story continue writing as you are now I'm very impressed with it and I am looking forward to it thank you for actually we writing a good Naruto's fanfiction so please keep up the good work with this and just remember how you start a story stay true to what he is no matter what I want to tell you I like your stories please believe me I'm a fan of the show because I like what you wrote and you made it believable that this could happen and I don't think it's far-fetched I think it's very possible for the character of
shizune the fall in love with Movoto but in Japanese culture it's forbidden for older women to love younger men just so you know that's that's why it would not happen in the anime or Manga but it's okay for older men who love younger women talk about a bunch of hypocrites as I said before keep up with the fanfic look forward to reading more have a great New Year's and no spiker in the eggnog oh wait that was my cat the fictitious stories of my cat rated M for Mature audiences why is not be a menace to society while drinking his juice in South Central

well, Naruto finds out that he's falling in love with the wrong girl...
Let's find out what's going to happen between Naruto and Shizune in the next chapter!

Kudos to the story, I would love to hear some of the other stories with a naruto x shizune pairing, I love rare pairings like these, especially fond of the naruto x Karin pairing which is an ass to find with an actual story instead of a one shot. But I agree with the saying, you can't find a story you want to read about you gotta write it yourself.

are you going to write a sequel to the story? the story the story is very good I like it can you make a story longer next time because it is a good story impossible believable and I hope you do it quickly cuz I like to read more it

Можно ли мне перевести этот текст и опубликовать на другом сайте?(Can I translate this text and publish it on another website?)

... Major OOC-ness?

I'm a new fanfiction reader and I love this fic.
Now I'm literally begging on my knees, PLEASE! UPDATE THIS STORY, PLEASE RESURRECT THIS FIC, I BEG OF YOU MASTER!

...let me know when you update... I'll look forward to it.

Laters.