good job, a little confusing thou...

that was beautiful

i love

:)

i felt like iwas there

(sear drop) :)

Brillinatly written.
Please continue1

My very first time reading a Scooby Doo fanfic - and a Fred/Shaggy pair-up - that was awesome! And yet, I felt it still stayed in character. I love Fred's possessiveness. Definitely a fav. :)

AWWWWW! I stumbled across this fanfic last might purely out of curiosity and I must say I love it! Your writing was amazing but there's only one thing I would like to point out.. Your points of view were slightly confusing, I couldn't tell whose thoughts were whose at times but I loved it regardless :) Keep writing and I will surely keep reading!

-Shay

I NEVER knew I could enjoy something like this so much! You did a FANTASTIC job! Oh my, I wanna blush and laugh, and smile all at the same time! I loved it! GREAT job!

lol loved it!

I was just wandering through authors on my list and then ended on their list, and I found you and this story, this was a great start. Honestly you're a fantastic author! I wish I was as good as you are! I'll continue reading this!

This was very entertaining love it

i really love this, it's great.

I loved it, The entire thing. Getting past the fact that it's Shaggy and Freddy, two of my favourite childhood guys(ah innocence), which made me blush and look away quite a few times I admit, the story was captivating and well written. It made me love the characters and I clearly saw the progression of the story. The interwoven story of Shaggy's ex was a beautiful touch that made Fred's possessive and overprotective nature take a romantic light and I freaking loved it. I love that particular brand of love where one person is all " I'll never let you go and I'' never let anyone touch or hurt you". Jealousy is hot. My heart ached at times and at others it made me envious of this relationship that you portrayed.

Basically, it was awesome and it pleased my slash loving soul to bliss.

- Sorry for going on like that

Peace, Ru!