The love I have for this cannot be transcribed in the window of time I've been granted.
The darkness, the filth and the utter decadence you've piled into this twisted narrative with is nothing short of art. You've made me want to create something dark and cruel now. Reading this made my stomach twist in discomfort, and flinch, and then I felt ill and dirty and plain creeped out. And that's EXACTLY what you were aiming for, wasn't it? I applaud you! It fits the feel of the sleezy rat underworld perfectly.
I feel guilty leaving this so short, but I haven't seen the movie in a while. I just remember the underworld and the anger and this is... a wonderful expansion on that. It feels like canon, if canon wouldn't mind deviating even more from their otherwise happy narrative. I can't say I've seen anything like it, though if I had I doubt it could come close to fitting as well as you crafted this to fit. The descriptiveness combined iwth the word choices and the imagery, it really felt like gilded garbage, in the absolute best way. Sometimes a story needs to make you feel sick to delight you.

umm... im a bit confused. is this supposed to be.. as if roscuro is.. um.. lusting after botticelli? excuse my denseness, but um... yeah. im not usre if the whole thing is that botticelli is finding "pleasure" in this description, maybe just have a sick mind...

Very interesting.

This was very, very well written. I didn't see any mistakes in it, and I almost always see atleast one in a story, even in books! Good job!

Herz von Silber

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i luved it a bit confusing at the start with the characters but otherwise it was awesome. The dialogue was cool and the conclusion was a great way to end the chapter :)Im defs gonna check out your other stories

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It doesn't make sense at the beginning, but afterwards it's quite the suspense story. It's a bit hard sometimes to tell who's talking, but eventually, I could figure it out. The characterization is very good.

I can't say quite why, but I like the dialogue between them-maybe it was the sort of roundabout way it was written. Anyway, that's the best way I can say it.

I like this, too. Quite a turnabout from the slightly lighter canon, but that's okay. :)

""What does it do, boy?" His mentor asked poignantly,"-I think this should be a period, not a comma, personally, but that's just me.

Thanks for writing,

Ashe

I can't believe there's only one fanfici in this section!

This was awesomely written - even better, the rats were IC. I really like it - you should write more like this!

omg, this is the only story in this section! XDXDXDXD

Very evil and creepy ...

Glad that there's something out about desperueax ... :)

Delightfully creepy. Well done.

An well-written look into the horrific culture of the rats. I couldn't have written it that scary. :)

P.S. LONG LIVE DESPEREAUX!

Can you delete that old post, from Tokyo girl that was me also..that my old closed account..sorry here is my review review

This is amazing! Great Fic so cool first one to site is about Botty, hes so sexy and fine..so hot and smexy too the fic it pure genius that just flows hehe..I hope you can read mine soon 3

WOW THAT WAS GREAT! 3

Me likey

I was hoping I be first to post first TOD fic since I did request it..but am glad you were the first lovely job!

I hope you shall read mine when its up 3