A great story. Very well written.

Very good.. I loved it

You HAVE to continue, it's a very good story so far

Umm ya Lyn, YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! I'm now wanting more! I like the concept you have going on. I'm intrigued and interested. Hmm, you did well with capturing the reader and honestly I love a good Alice fic. So please BB, continue:)

Lauren

ooh man shoke therapy...no good..poor Alice..but at least Jasper is a good friend for her to have there...and seriously WTF James..what a creeper..I would totally love to see you make this into an actual story..I want to see what happens and where the heck Jaz is? hope you continue with it..

I say no story! This one page of this story is strong enough for me to understand the whole reason of why alice is alice! Great job on the story! I could really feel the emotion and the pain! This story is PERFECT IN EVERY WAY!

Ok, so you HAVE to continue this one. It was great! I want to know what happened to Jazz! Does he save Alice! And what about her parents? You've done some pretty great writing, keep it up! :)

I would say continue with this and make it a story. You have left me wanting to know more with an interesting take on Alice's time in the insane asylum with the inclusion of Jasper at that point in the story.

I've said it before, but I have to say it again. Your talent is extraordinary! You HAVE to continue this one-shot, LOL. I would love to see some Jasper and Alice interaction and find out more about Alice and how she got there - as well as her relationship with her parents, etc.

You are the best!