Beautiful

I loved every bit of this. You pegged all of their personalities down to a T, with the extra kind of action/ dramatics in as well. Thanks for this!

While the story was well written and the plot flowed smoothly, something just felt off about it. Maybe it was that all the characters were very OOC, and I'm sorry but to me they just did not fit the characters I know and love. Not once did Dean call his brother Sammy, and he calls him that all the time. Also Charlie wouldn't be so timid either. Good well written story, just didn't like the way you portrayed the characters.

ps. Don and Dean sound nothing alike and David would have picked up on the way 'Don' sounded like their suspect he had been in a room with before (or heard speaking from behind the one way mirror)

Loved this!

*grinning and laughing at the same time: made an odd sound* XDDD

This... this... this is just too amazing!

Oh God! I LOVE IT! I REALLY DO!

LOVE BROTHERS SO MUCH!

I'm happy they understand each other!

LOVELY!

Holy crap, you hit all the right brotherly love buttons of mine.

The Winchester bros and the Eppes bros, so awesome. Loved this story.

Loved all the brotherly love in this story.

Nicely done all characters ring largely true maybe Charlie a bit wimpy, but it fits well into both series and the concept worked well

Loved the story. You could change the rating to T, maybe more people will read it.

This was brilliant!

I really liked it. I've read it a few times already. You should write more numb3rs fics. You just get their dynamics so spot on, It's really kind of disappointing that this is the only one. And I love supernatural/numb3rs crossovers, btw. Way to few of them.

like the fic

The drabble itself was very powerfully written and offered a marvelous final line. *big grin*

And I'm really happy you continued the story for a bit until Sam and Dean were free again at last. The conversation between Don and the older Winchester never lost its appeal throughout, and I suspected right away that Sam hadn't really taken Charlie as a hostage.

Also very nice was the scene with the FBI agent and Dean dropping the gun practically at the same time, thus neither had to worry about the other maybe suddenly 'changing their mind'.

Another great point about the whole story (and reasonable considering their background) was that the brothers Winchester easily took control of the situation without breaking a sweat.

I can see why Dean was amicably chiding Don for suggesting to blame Dean with "kidnapping and armed assault" when earlier on he stated that the older brother's charges' file was already too long to read out completely then and there. Poor boys.

Did I already mention your title was awesome, sweetysmart?

I love it

Great medium for a cross over! Very believable! And I love Numb3rs so that is a bonus too! Great job!

Loved it! Who wouldn't want to read until the end? ;) The brothers were great.

Although, even if you had stopped at the top, it still would've been excellent!