p.s. dean and sam both had the mental capacity to survive the worst hell had to offer from both alistair and lucifer. you have them fainting because of some bullshit. in doing so youve taken a shit on some of my favorite literary characters. for that i cannot forgive you.

Aaaaaaand I'm done. You lied. In the description it says adventure/friendship. i dont see it. all i see is a whole lot of dean(and now sam) fainting like an old woman in almost every chapter. the adventure hasnt been going on, and the friendship is pretty much devolving into crying hugs. thats all youve been showing us. hugs and catharsis are great, but both of these properties have miniscule amounts of exactly those things. if you had put the label on this story as drama/hurt/comfort i wouldnt care as much but this is just another example of how people think they can write a compelling story of how these guys just need more hugs, regardless of the fact that most things in the multiverse want them dead.

you keep on making dean say da-a-a-ad like hes a fuckin 14 year old girl. stop it.

you started off so well! a story about how dean meets some mutants and then adventure ensues! but this is veering off into familiar territory. dean is going to be real hurt and cry a lot, so john and bobby and sam and his new mutant friends all come together to give him hugs, because that what he truly needs! horseshit. ive read this story before. just because you've added the x-men to it doesn't make it better.

Decent story. Characters and relationships well developed.

Unfortunately, drama, romance, and angst took over the majority of the plot and word count. This focus onto OCs and drama instead of developing the way the lore would combine has caused a lot of canon dissonance and plot holes/contradictions.

Still a good read for the writing and characters, but Lore fans of SPM or the X-Men will be disappointed.

Awesome story! Absolutely great!

thank you for sharing

I want you to go stand in a corner and think about what you did.

'A volume appeared well worn book, the pages dog-eared'

A librarian would never.
Truly to treat a book like that, for shame.

Thank you for sharing this story.

Oh I would really love a sequel to this! So much to explore especially with the demons and figuring out what the yellow eyed demon did and the. With Angels and the apocalypse! That definitely would of had a good conclusion too!

I forgot to tell you that I’m so happy I’ve reached the end of this story! I was reading this story for such a long time. I forget how long; it was at least a month. Sometimes I’d get bored and go read some other fics and come back to it. I’m so glad I read the whole thing! Will you please continue or write a sequel that answers my questions? It’s be so great to read more about this!

Wow. I think you just created another loose end or a few what will Magneto and his forces do at the Institute? Will Libby get pregnant too? What will Jess have? A boy or a girl?

YAY! Double wedding! This has been a long time coming. And a baby for Sam and Jess! That’s awesome! Will Dean and Libby have a baby?

So I was reading and I got excited see? cause your writing was really good, but then you fell into that old fanfiction trap of cliches, Up to chapter 7 was some really good writing, A. You can actually write and spell properly unlike most of the people on this site. B. You had some great original content going but then as soon as I saw the words "AU" in chapter 8 thats where I was like "Oh no he is really doing it is he". I am struggling to get through chapter 8, You had something really good going here and now its probably ruined by the usual tired old cliches of "New guy decides to stick around for a while and saves the helpless mutants" that general concept.
The only thing that is keeping me reading is the hope that you do not do shipping
Fanfiction standards I give this a 7/10 and thats really high.

Max Eisenhardt? Magneto’s real name is Erik Lensherr. Is Max Eisenhardt an alias for Erik Lensherr?

please write sequel, it's great