what a great story. Poor Tim, though.

I just read your entire fic from start to finish, and as it is now 4:15 A.M., please bear with me on typos and whatnot.

The story was very well written, and the plot was not cliche. The grammar and word choice was exemplary, and it all tied in really well.

I like how you ended this fic with the same sort of ideas that you would typically see in a standard episode. While it was slightly disappointing for them to not all be led out in handcuffs, the loss of power would most definitely haunt them.

The relationship and bonds forged between the team was beautifully written and displayed. Not only were they (almost completely) canon compliant, they were realistic and enjoyable to read.

I have also really enjoyed your other fic, "What's Eating Timothy McGee?" and I loved this fic in the same way. Overall, this was a wonderful fic that I would highly reccomend, and definitely plan on re-reading at a later date.

Gostei muito da sua estória principalmente porque terminou ela .
Eu acho o Tim muito bom embora não goste de ver ele sofrendo.
Parabéns.!?

I found this while looking for something to read for a short while. If I’d known it was going to be such compulsive reading I would have saved it to read in one go, one evening. Griping stuff, well written. Just one question - is it an American variation or an autocorrect idiocy - at one point you use the phrase “mute point” (mute meaning silent) whereas I would have written “moot point” (moot meaning academic or no longer relevant) ?

This was a brilliant piece of work! I certainly enjoyed it immensely. Keep it up!

What a wild ride from start to finish. Loved reading it.

always awesome thank you for sharing

That WAS AN Amazing story - hope McGees feet soon heal.
I really shouldn't have read all that before starting work for the day, but never mind,
The story was too compelling to put down.

Every hospital room should have a chandelier. McGee is recovering, the team and support staff are tired, - meeks me want to rest for them, Good work.

Ahhh; I always liked Fornell

It is getting scarier - whose side is the CIA on?

Read a lot in one go; starting reading this a bit ago but things interrupted, they way things do. Life was battering poor McGee almost from the start, it seems. Some of his attack sounds horrific. This is good story telling.

I'm feeling pale and shocked, who are these nasty, sadistic people? Hope Toy and Gibbs find them; hope McGeee recovers with mind intact.

Just finished reading this in one go. It's currently 1:30 in the morning. Congratulations, you've kept me riveted for hours, and I regret nothing. Beautiful writing, excellent characterization, a stunning and suspenseful plot, along with a healthy dose of McGee!whump. Really, really well done. I'm off to look at your profile and read something else you wrote. Or maybe I'll do that in a few hours after I've had some sleep...

more