Ahhhh I loved this. Having Will change who he was because of Jules showing him what life could be. Very much love!

excellent ! great writing!
I am so impressed I am saving your other stories to read.

Oh Stars! I have just binged this whole story, and it's amazingly fantastic! Can't rave about it enough! Had me riveted from the first word! Great writing! Thank you!

It’s been a few years but whenever I come back to this story, I tear up a bit. Thank you so much for writing this!

One of the most interesting setups I've read! Old Darcy and New Darcy come through so clearly. Thank you for sharing!

I love it so far. I’m glad ther was no ‘secret baby’.

Great start. Love the cat lady kitchen.

ah, I just love your writing style. it's so quippy, like Spider-Man in prose format. and this story really took me back in time cuz I graduated college in '09 and now I feel a smidge old. sigh.

I enjoyed the premise, though many parts made me rather sad. I won't lie; I teared up when Darcy was saying goodbye to his sons in the alternate universe. even knowing that he would likely make things right with Lizzy in real life wasn't enough to make up for erasing the existence of Liam and Sam. I'm sure it's just the sappy mommy in me, but I couldn't imagine knowing that going to sleep would take my kids away...but I'd better stop there before I actually do cry, cuz I totes will. point is, sad as that scene was, it made me feel something and I could relate to it. that's good writing.

it was a bittersweet story and I couldn't put it down.

Terrific story. I love the dialogue esp. Elizabeth's. Very witty. Thanks for sharing

This was so great to read ! Thank you for writing it!

When you read something for the gazillionth time and still giggle and cry. i love this so bloody much ughhh its brilliant

This made me cry. Again. I loved it!

God, I’m crying as I write this. This is utterly heartbreaking!

oh, so I know this is an old, old story. I've read it once already a while back. but your AN in ch 7 about this Darcy being middle class instead of super wealthy maybe being a deal breakers for some people really caught my eye this time. and my thought is, . I'm fine with it. the term MIDDLE class covers an awful lot of ground, and some of that ground is awfully close to wealthy, if not super wealthy. its a nice break from all the moderns in which he has inherited a multimillion-dollar (or pound) family business and has the penthouse in NY/London and Pemberly and the house in Greece or wherever and has all the chauffeurs and private jets and *yawn*. I'm glad you didn't go there.

I enjoyed this story a lot.