This was physically painful to read.

This was absolutely beautiful. Fantastic job!

OMG, Hungary is so heartless! Does she really not have the slightest inkling about what she's doing to Prussia? If she doesn't, I guess that makes it better, but it's still so tragic - from Prussia's POV. Oh my God, I wish these two could just work it out...

i cried ... bravo! please go in a manga business and find a manga artist too i could feel the pain of poor gil im a writer too and i would of but in the end something like

Gilbert hated her for what she done, no he hated what she done too him no way in hell would Gilbert see her off. He hated this feeling. Regret. Depression. Emptiness. No that wasn't even the begging of the pain. He wanted to make her suffer in the memories of him like she did him. He wanted closure any type of closure. He needed the memories of her to burn in the back of his head. He took his last energy and bolted down the stares opened the door. Elizabeth still there waiting. He cupped her cheeks in his hands and kissed her forcefully but yet gentle. He let go and whispered in her ear now feel regret.

Hello again x3

The only mistake I noticed was;

"He couldn't remember ever feeling this much pain. His nation wasn't under attack, no more people were dying than what was usual. There was no civil war going on, so why did he feel like he was being eaten up from the inside."

It's supposed to have a question mark at the end, and not a period.

Ah well, this story was good anyway.

PLEASE CONTINUE IT! I'll be your beta if you continue it. Please! I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH! O.O

TT_TT (in emo corner)

I role play Hungary in a Hetalia RPG thing, and well I'm a Hungary X Prussia girl. If this turns out to be true then the two other main RPG players are going to be dealing with a very depressed Hungary, and we just got rid of a Depressed America!

(sorry for dumping this on you, despite my conflicts I actually did like the story, please keep up the good work)

-Moon-chan

Beautiful...just beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes, not to mention it was very realistic. Poor Gilbrt. :

I must say: this is the best PruHun angst fic I've read.. For now. I wondered how Prussia must've looked liked when he opened that door. Really lovely! And the ending was fantastic. I adore sad Prussia! More of this?

It's official, you're my favourite het-alia writer. ;) Are all of your Prussia/Hungary fics in the same universe though?

Oh God.

My keyboard is wet from the tears.

F.

Why must this be so awesome and yet so sad? ;A;

Awesome story, Dear.

Awh! ;_; In a way, this is like, realistic. It makes sense, sadly.

I'm not really a fan of sad endings and unrequited love but this seem to have won me over. ; n ;

i'll gladly be your beta if you still need one. )

I'll be an editor if you still need one! :)

I've got school as well but, I shall do my best, provided you still need an editor.

Poor Gilbert, but I liked it. I believe I felt my heart break somewhere in the context.

I actually cosplayed as Elizabeta at a convention yesterday (*random much*).

030artastic

That was so..Angsty! I could imagine the whole thing in my head, it fits quite well actually...

Awesome job!