Reviews for The Swan Twins |
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Guest chapter 15 . 10/4/2018 I thought James attacked her |
vampirelady13 chapter 10 . 9/19/2018 Bella is a spoiled bitch and dresses like a slut who is begging to be treated inappropriately because she wants to dress like a who're. You story is horrible. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 Wow I can see they really care about Charlie. Not talking to him for two years that's disgusting. They both seem to care about money more than there father. I feel bad for Charlie having kids who care more about money then him. I hope he with Sue and her kids can teach Bella and Emmett what a wonderful father they are treating like carp. |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/31/2017 Your story would be good if you didn't repeat the same dialog over and over from différent viewpoints. Just give one viewpoint and move on. Or drags thé story. |
CarvieCamfia chapter 43 . 10/27/2016 When you updating? Been waiting for ages |
CarvieCamfia chapter 44 . 5/25/2015 Updste please xxxxx |
GeminiEyes chapter 41 . 4/5/2015 well its been a long time since ive read any of this story but I have been holding out hope that you would finish it *fingers cross* that u get back in the mood |
Guest chapter 44 . 2/27/2015 I read this story once or twice a year and honestly it's the best story on fan fiction. Please continue writing. 3 |
eddiepixie chapter 44 . 1/3/2015 wow cool but dude u left us hanging nice story by the way |
GeminiEyes chapter 43 . 12/1/2014 well its been a long time since ive read any of this story but I have been holding out hope that you would finish it *fingers cross* that u get back in the mood |
Motherof8 chapter 44 . 10/25/2014 Hi, I would love to read this. Hope you can be able to finish it. Thanks for taking the time out of your busy life to write for us. |
bullied no more2 chapter 44 . 5/31/2014 Umm... I don't know if ull c this but I wanted to ask can u please finish this I know I might be to late but this story inspired me. I was bullied but when I read this I learned to stand up for my self. I have lots of codefendants now... please or at least make one more chapter |
Jen chapter 7 . 5/24/2014 You really need to work on your grammar. It's (you're) for you are, (were) instead of was, and NO ONE says No more, or I seen. I'd like the story if I wasn't too busy cringing. It gives me a very bad picture of who Bella and Emmett are as people. |
Edwardsgirlsince1918 chapter 44 . 5/10/2014 Good chapter I loved it |
Liz 1974 chapter 44 . 1/20/2014 Oh I understand I have a 13 year old but I hope u complete it asap |