They fell in love too quick in my opinion...I don't want to hear any "true love" shit, you can't fall in love that fast. Maybe they have little crushes on each other. But they can't date yet, they practically just met, okay?

That was so easy! What the hell!
All this time, she could just touch him and boom! He can see again!?
Meh. Thats too easy and Iggy only likes her because she healed him.

OMG I SWEAR I DIDN'T COPY YOU OR ANYTHING, I have my own story with a 13 year old girl named Snow, thats so funny since your girl is named Ember. But my bird kid not related to any of them, and it's more of a rewrite of the series.

This is awesome i was screaming at the computer for her to tell iggy how she felt UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Awwww! Chapter 16 was sooo cute! I love emberiggy together! Update soon!

Not bad at all. Look forward to reading more

LOVE IT! And YES IGGY GOT THE GIRL! I seriously cant wait for more. I'll be waiting. Goodjob and Goodluck.

~Read Something Wonderful~

~Carlie Ky~

when are they gonna kiss?

Wait for it...

I cant wait for more! i love this story!

OMG! i love how Iggy can see again ! and i cant wait to see what happens next please update soon and i think sometime Em (new nickname :D) should get a new power, small ever just yea i dont know. . . UPDATE!

I liked everything but the scene between Max and Fang. The dialouge was a little awkward and, honestly, the make out part was totally out of the blue and didn't really fit.

Hum . . . me has no question I can thinks of . . . nice chapter though I like it

this is great but write more if you value my sanity

write more i love it