Well I got as far as the word Malfoy and as soon as I read it a voice inside my head said. oh no not another idiot writer. Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley and especially Hermione Granger hate all Malfoy's with a passion. Any writer who write different is a total idiot. Each and every Malfoy was in on the torture Hermione suffered at Malfoy mansion. Each and every Malfoy had tried to kill them at some stage or other. Malfoy even tried to kill Potter just after Potter saved his worthless life. There is no turning that around and only an utter idiot would try.

I enjoyed this story.

I like how the "Hermione and Draco in lust" thing doesn't means that she loves him in this story.

I thought it was really good. I think that you should write a sequel to this story about Hermione getting pregnant (I have this thing for Hermione accidentally getting pregnant with Harry's baby). Thanks I really hope you consider doing a sequel.

Cute and Hot! XD

What a load of bile inducing shit. I never even got to finish reading this rubbish, as soon as I saw the absolutely stupid 'Draco is a friend' piece I knew what a load of shit it would be. The idiots who write Draco as a friend are simple brained idiots who have absolutely no idea what so ever what they are doing.

Story Added to C2: Harry's Lemonade Stand

hahahaha i loved it! but there might be a good sequel starter because they didn't use protection? lol

My only problem with this story is when Ron and Hermione was talking about the chemistry between her and Draco, and when Harry said that the sexual tension between Hermione and Draco were unreal... other than that great story!

Haha, I love Ron in this fic. Most people write him as a total idiot that has no idea what's going on, but this is realistic. "I'm going to go find Luna." HAHA

been looking for a decent Hermione and Harry fic. it's a wonder why they're so rare for such an obvious coupling! this is well done, i really like it. no excessive swearing, realistic character behaviour, nice and simple.

I know you said this would only be a one-shot, but a sequel would be great!

that was really cute :)

i think you should write a follow up.

Maria xx

lol this was hot. The ending is funny. Too bad for Draco lol

in the real world it would never have taken even this long for these two to be together , i think 3rd year and there after , nothing should have stoped the inevitable,"the only big mistake JKR",,Oh,,and i luv your filthy mouth,,Thank you for sharing {mostly H/Hr please}

Not too bad, but I would like to say that the way you used the work "chemistry" so much, and as quite a lame excuse at that, was a little off putting. The key here, especially in one shots like this, is to use a wide variety of descriptive words, not just one repetitively.