I'M CRYING

please keep writing this *cries*

i really like this story :) ive read it before i really hope you will finnish it.

Wow, it seems as if Voltar not just couldn't hold his liquor... He can't take a smoke, either, can he?

Given the fact I left and came back here after a year... I'm rather sad to see that this story has been cut short and incomplete. Then again, it would make a dramatic finish. Leaving us at the edge of our seats clawing the sofa in anticipation for more.

What does happen to the League of Super Evil?

Does Frogg achieve total world domination?

Oh wow! I've really enioyed the story thus far, and you've kept the characters 'in-character' the whole time too! Truely admirable!

I've laughed at all of the jokes (as immature as some of them are - purple piss on a 'This tall to ride sign? Hilarious!) and really felt the drinking atmosphere throughout the story.

I really like the character development that you have explored, especially Red's; whoever thought he had suh a dark side to him! Doktor Frogg is a little sainer than he usually is (maybe drinking might have something to do with that xD) but you have really grasped every other element of his character quite well. Voltar is cute and idiotic as always and Doom is still a pervert.

I'm looking forward to when you pick up this story again, I really like the direction it is headed. Keep up the great work!

erm... Its a little too out of this world for me! It was'nt like us at all. Getting drunk and stoned isn't that much fun!

Pfft I like this. And as a random comment I'm at least a quarter German but don't mind jokes, especially since nothing's determined and I could come from a long line of Scottish-mobster-Eskimo people for all I know. I appreciated Frogg's attitude, he's funny.

There are certain grammatical rules regarding dialogue I can't explain properly (since I've failed the subject multiple times), but I know you definitely broke them a number of times here. Besides that the piece had no errors regarding language that I could see, and the characters weren't bad either.

*GASP* This is freaking AWESOME! I LOVE how creatively you've written everybody, especially Frogg (who I LOVE), while still keeping them totally IC! And all the misfortunes that befall the poor doktor... just like in the show! *hugs him*

I can so see Frogg as a drinker, to get away from his shit-miserable existance. And I can see kinda Red getting rough with somebody if somebody REALLY pushed him, or especially if they hurt one of his team-mates (esp. Froggy). He's such a gentle giant!

You mentioned you were thinking of exploring Frogg's past? I'd like that! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You have major talent!

This is so funny.

I like the equation: Voltar drugg Fun.

I like how you are handle the characters, specially Doomy.

I want to read more.

Omg, this is the funniest fanfic i have ever read in my life.

Nice work! Keep it up.

Great stuff. I love LOSE primarily for the personality dynamics and slapstick (yay cartoon violence), and you've captured both quite nicely in this fic. You're writing Frogg a lot ballsier than he is in the show, and though I'm really partial to cringing loser villians, I can dig your characterization on it's own merits. Besides, once you get a character loaded enough, pretty much anything goes. Speaking of which, excited to see what happens when Red gets angry and really hulks out. Keep it coming!

ohman, this story is a hoot. please continue, it's cracking me up. dr. frogg and alcohol makes me happy. as well as doomegeddon humping poodles hahaha

and ive never heard of harvest fest, but im checking into that as soon as i press submit review haha

[xanadu is one of my favorites, made me real happy to see it in here]

This makes me laugh, please finifh it son

P.S: Yer dumb

Awesome! Please continue! Fun fact, Dr. Frogg is German-Yiddish-American. He doesn't pronounce Ws with a V, and my dad says that he sounds part Yiddish. Either way; I like the whole "I was born in Munich, you asshole" part. ~