Reviews for Last Petal
great gospel chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
Oh my god you gave me a sliver of hope that she might actually make it in time, but then you tore it away. It was harsh and clipped, but all too fitting for this scene.
Miehczyslaw chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
*dies*
This has been so heartbreaking, and cruel.
I still grieving over the death of Zack and that will not change neither in twenty years. The possibility of the earth told Aerith that he died and she could not reach him is, is incredibly devastating.
But the drabble is beautiful. I felt very in character.
And it hurts.
(i love it).
Final Memories chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Wow, I basically cried, since I was listening to Aerith's Theme.
Wonderful job!
Yuleen75 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
You're going to make me cry...
inkbender chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Emotionally touching in all its brevity. Bravo.
0Wishful-Thoughts0 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Man, this was powerful. O_O

I'm not really sure what to say. . . But keep writing!
Dichotomous-Dragon chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Wow, so short and yet so powerful. The other reviewer said it well: :'( OUCH.

But, also awesome :)
NeverFree chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I'm really not sure I can manage anything vaguely like my usual coherency, but I want you to know that my heart broke as I read that. Not very often we see something so short and sweet and emotionally charged that leaves such an impact.

I also want you to know that it is a massive injustice to this story that you've only gotten 3 other reviews.
thisaccountisdeadnow chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Ouch...

Fantastic but...

Ouch. :'(
hali bear chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
wow. that was really good. i hate the ending to this game, Zack should not have been killed like that. And poor aerith. she waited for him for 4 years, only to 'feel' him die! that sucks!
Aerith Queen of Cetra chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Ah! Another short but sweet fic and I love this one too! I especially love the ending when she hears Cloud in the distance and she thinks it's from the Clouds above. Just beautiful