Reviews for Addicted to the Way you Look at Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the last chapter made me drool...it was that good |
![]() ![]() It was amazing! I loved it 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() totally love it. it's so cute, one of the best Grimmichi fanfics I have read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story make more Ichigo and Grimmjow story's :) |
![]() ![]() ichi-neesan did these dirty deeds with GRIMMJOW? not even... i cant.. HAHAHAHAHAHA kurosaki would nvr do dat :3 (i wish he wud doe...) YAOIYAOI! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just amazing. I really like it - they're so fuckin' cute, lol good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story best grimm/ichi story yet great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful... *cries* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amaysing! I love this story, i wish u would make a conpanion for this story, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Your writing style is amazing and so inticing! Makes me wanna keep on readin more and more. Keep up the awesome work Artista |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha the ice cream scene made me laugh :P this fanfic is so adorable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW the ending was just so cute and romantic, I just loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO SWEET! love this story - kind ogf sad it's not longer. haha. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading this whole story and I loved it so much! I think it's REALLY difficult to write a GrimmIchi story when it's actually the Bleach storyline, but, obviously, that doesn't stop you! xD This is so wonderful. You kept both characters personalities so well and Ichigo wasn't a blushing girl like he is in a lot of other fanfictions. Another thing that I think is hard to do with a fanfiction is keep it in the same area and keep the story interesting. But, obviously, this doesn't stop you either! I think, even though, it was set in Ichigo's bedroom and the kitchen, it was absolutely interesting the whole way through! It's the same with the conversations. Personally, I find myself getting bored if their is too much conversation between the characters because they are just rambling about nothing. But Grimmjow and Ichigo weren't rambling in your fic. I think the conversations stayed interesting. There's really no constructive criticism I can give on it because you did three of the most hardest things to do in a fic and pulled it off superbly! Thanks for the awesome fic! :D Mojo2107 |