I wish people realised that poem is right, then maybe they would figure out why i end up acting pretty much bipolar all the time...;(

your a great writer, I love all the quotes you put in your story! great work!

I think this truly captured zexions emotions so thankyou for writing it

Did you make up those metaphors? If so, I think that those are really, really good! If not, they're still awesome, and you used them perfectly. I honestly can see something like this happening!

omg love this TwT!

I adore... HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Nice story. I don't find much stories like these. And the bold lines? Yeah, they're right.

LOVE IT! I Especially Love The Poem That Was incorporrated Into It! Did You Write It? Anyways Great Job!

Aw. Sweet. :)

And the bold stuff? So true. *nods*

Did you write the poem used in the story? Its really good!

I liked this story. Zexion was a bit out of character, but I look foward to seeing more Zemyx from you in the future. Happy (belated) Zemyx Day!

Hey there Alix, I'm going to call you that from now on, unless you really don't want me too. So I finally got to read this. And I'm going to review. I liked it, although Zexion was a little out of character. He lost his cool, which isn't really like him. Next time, have him do all of that stuff internally, but act completely collected, maybe blow up once, but not the way he did. Wow, I'm being rather mean in this, sorry, I just know you can do better. Ok, that sounds mean, but its meant as a compliment. I really do like it. It is one of my favorite pairings, and I absolutely love Zexion.

The thing about Zexy, is that there is a lot of things you can do with him. You can make him who ever you want on the inside, as long as you keep him collected on the outside. I would love to see another Zemyx fic from you, really, I would. Mainly because I love the pairing, and I love your writing style. I really liked it. Its an idea that is great to play around with a bit. Demyx 'waking up' Zexion if you will. Where Zexion is sort of resigned to his life and rather depressed, but not because he can't be of course, because he can't feel anything, and then having Demyx just agitate the crap out of him because he keeps acting like he can feel stuff, and then Zexy realizes that it bothers him because Dem isn't resigned and emotionless the way he is, and it makes him wonder if he has to be. Its a fun thing, really it is. Love hearing from ya, and love reading your stuff. Love you!

Z

Aww, I missed Zemyx Day... anyway, nice job with the lines in between the paragraphs, it flowed nicely. But poor Demyx, he's scared of spiders like me! Happy late Zemyx Day! :)

O_O that's scary. The 'Roses are red' bit, not the story itself, XD. It's os true, and very sweet. Well done!

WOO FREE STUFF! :D

lol, this was cute. poor antisocial zexion, in his basement library. he just wants to be loved. and poor demyx, being afraid of spiders. LOL.

happy zemyx day to you as well ;)