Please more.

Was hoping, but not expecting, to find a Will is Jack's son (it's almost impossible to find any story with a Will's father is... theme) really hope this will be continued one day.

I read your story and i like it so much. i'm so curios to see the next chapter and the reaction of magnus and the others members of the team at the news that jack is Will's father. please please please continue.

Write more plz!

this is really good

please update soon

good idea! too bad it doesn't look like you're continuing...

it's a good story, are u contuing?

I love this so much! even more as its pre CoE :)

i really wish you would continue this even though its unlikely :(

the whole jack being will's dad is very clever!

am praying that you continue you have no idea how happy that would make me :)

Will there be more to this? It's really good and I'd love to see how it pans out. *Puppy eyes*

This is a very interesting story, it would be great if it was continued.

3 im liking this and yay for pre COE keep it up when you get the chance

Really interesting start. My two favorite shows together. Love the way that you made Will into Jack's son. Please continue this story. I would love it.

It's a shame you haven't had a chance to work on this one in a while. It has some very good possibilities.

That's a good start. Is there going to be more?

Oh gosh...I really hope that you can continue this. I wanted more...