This was cool! A little short, but I did like that you showed so much of her background. I just think their kiss was a bit rushed but that's just me. Great job otherwise :)

So...sad...

Awawawa this was nice and fluffy.

This chapter made my eyes well up.

Besides a spelling thing or two, this was fantastic

I'll read the rest and review, too.

~Chocolates

i'm sorry but... it was all to quick and confusing... great story writing though

i'm so confused! who are the people arguing? why is chelsea fifteen? i thought she was 18 when she left the care home?

just a helping-tip, try to explain things to the readers more clearly

waow prett good! short chapters,though

Aw. That was adorable! Totaly adding to my fav. stories.

Aw. She feels so secure. Vaughn was the boy in the orphanage wasn't he? Thats cute that they knew each oter before

Yes, very fluffy and cute. Great job! Hope you write more stories in the near future!

Nice! I loved how you brought Vaughn into the care home, I think you should have done more with them too at the home though. Other than that, great story! I liked how you brought it the present-day part with Vaughn and Chelsea also. Great work!

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That story was great. u did really good. go Vaughn and Chelsea!

I like this. Normally I don't have much time for any form of romance, but I will admit this is very well written. Just have a quick look through, however. You've forgotten a few spaces in places.