god damn it the ending made me cry (not the long hard dick one) i really looooooveeeeee the story naruto being a badass guy and sasuke being dominant omgggg... And those fights are awesome you nice keep Going aaaakkkk

Thank you for the nice story.

still hot in 2018. author! love the story god!

I've just read this story for the 3rd time, it always gets me so emotional. I love it !

I loved your story!Thank you very much for this amazing work \o/

Super. Thank author.

I felt the awkwardness that Naruto frlt; awesome writing. Im happy the stories finished, happy ending, but then it's over which is bad. Id l9ve to see a harem of SasuxNaruxGaara...sigh...that might have been fun.

Cool story

Oh, there were so many things you could have elaborate on. The whole concept of ki was glossed over, taking in consideration how crucial it was in fights. At least that's the impression I got. You kept the whole Jiraiya's misterious story off-screem - I hope it wasn't just picking the easiest way :p You wrote the ending in the way that makes you wonder, what happened all those months later. Did Naruto score well enough to stay close to Sasuke? I'm a sucker for happy endings, so let's pretend he did. :) I enjoyed the reading a lot.

Btw, I know Naruto is very forgiving, but that's very hipocritical of Konan to beg him to spare Pein. I don't remember her saying anything, when her team was buchering people for kicks.

OMG WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN ALL MY LIFE!? I can't believe I haven't read this story after years of reading naruto fanfiction! How in the world?!

THANK YOU for such a wonderful piece of art. You are a crafty wordsmith that deserves ALL OF THE PRAISE! Can't wait to read your other work!

Great story! Loved the characters in it. Sexy and entertaining.

Incredible story :)

enjoyed this from beginning to end! right amt of drama, angst and plot! and of course smut and all the heated moments was just perfection *heart*, nothing bad to say really, only thing I would have liked to read about them switching with Naruto on top but yeah overall great! off to check if you have anymore stories

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I loved this whole story and I'm kind of sad it took me so long to find it. It had amazing build up and detail and I loved that they didn't just jump into a relationship or bed with each other as they do in some stories. Overall it was a great reading experience. You have some major talent for story writing and please keep up the good work.