Oh my god! That was so... awesome! It was really good.

When Duncan calls him Princess...LOVE IT!

Daaaaaamn this was really good, I like your Noah (If anyone tried to write an in-character Noah, nothing would happen, cause he's too lazy to do anything XD). There isn't enough DuncanxNoah out there. Awesome job!

(-fangirls over One Fine Day- Its one of the cutest things ever!$

Hmmm! Yummy! Loved it! Great job! :D

~Princess

You should either make a sequel or a second chapter because this is awesome! PLEEASE!

Ah. I see a bit of 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' like in 'Pale'!

*gasp* Noah is the first Princess! In your universe, of course. But still. *gasp*

Maybe part of Duncan's charm is his right-angle chin.

Oh wait. Second Princess?

Of course the delinquent would notice anyone trying to be unseen.

I bet Noah was dreaming of kissing Duncan that time he kissed Cody's ear.

Oh, Noah. If only you knew what would happen next. Duncan calls you and Courtney the same nickname! He likes her too!

Nice~ X3

Aw, I love it! Nice choice Noah! I can't wait to see what's next. And have I told you how much I love your quick updates? Because I really do!

o. I think, I may faint... *Faints tho catches herself* GREAT STORY! :D