Dang! Your story was really good and thank you my friend.

already explained myself for why I saw this ship coming

ITADEI I knew from the moment the birds started showing up and was sure about it when there child showed up

Love it

Awww so awesome!

Ehhhh, probably just me, but Naruto came off as transphobic.

But good story

Hey! Stop with the ItaDei already. I'm seriously reconsidering my favorite yaoi pairing if you continue doing this. But I love them. Like a more mature version of SasuNaru.

I, for one, did not expect that. Absolutely not. Far from that, actually. I thought the kid was some kind of time-travelling child of Sasuke and Naruto. Turns out I'm reading too much fan fictions about time-travelling because I didn't even consider the possibility that another blonde-haired blue-eyed man and a raven-haired man are still living somewhere in there. Really stupid of me, now that I think about it. But what the hell is that child's purpose. The suspense is killing me.

There's this thing called" condom"... -.-

I really enjoyed reading your story! The story was very well-written. The emotion the characters felt were felt by the reader :) keep it up.

love it

Awww... It's so sweet

this was really a great story. very touching, though i wonder if perhaps Sasuke and Naruto would ever come face to face with Itachi and Deidara after a while.

im kinda confused... did sasuke and naruto have consentual sex or was it rape?

Damn, that was depressing as hell and was there really a kid there or was he just crazy. I also feel like i just missed something very important when that kid was speaking. Still, your writing style has greatly improved.