| Reviews for More Than Bargained For |
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   abrant554 chapter 9 . 9/28/2016 Very interesting... |
| tiva.till.the.end01 chapter 8 . 4/6/2013 hey absolutly loved this xx |
| bluebell flames chapter 9 . 4/5/2011 While I've enjoyed your writing so far I think it's really poor etiquette to mark a story as Complete and leave the last chapter with a to be continued. You could set it up as two parts, or something with a sequel but this is just unfinished from what I can tell. |
| Nanuk chapter 9 . 1/14/2011 Wonderful story - great writing, great plot, great everything! |
| Nanuk chapter 6 . 1/14/2011 Oh no, the poor man! Very dramatic device ... lovely! |
| Nanuk chapter 4 . 1/14/2011 Lovely as all the previous chapters. I so enjoy your writing and plot development and the hard work that I recognize behind it and I hope you won't mind me being nit-picky with one sentence (Ducky said as he wiped away blood and pus with antiseptic) where it should just be "blood", because there hasn't been enough time for pus which follows infection and inflammation and needs at least 1-2 days to develop. As I said, that's a minor minor detail and now I'll just shut up and enjoy some more. :) Thanks so much for your gorgeous writing! Way to go! |
| Nanuk chapter 2 . 1/14/2011 Ohh, brilliantly done! The suspense is killing me, hehehe. |
| Pipy889 chapter 9 . 7/21/2010 great chapter, update soon |
| Betherzz chapter 9 . 7/21/2010 makes ya wonder how gibbs is going to get things back to normal... its a good chapter, cant wait to see what comes next |
| BreeilnaBane chapter 7 . 6/7/2010 awesoem story, your a great writer! I can't wait to read more... XD Thanks! |
| Zetta chapter 7 . 3/27/2010 You aren't going to just leave it like that, are you? What's he up to? Who is he really? How is Ziva going to make him pay for being such a... insert word of choice here. Interesting start. Hope you continue on with it and don't leave us wondering! |
| Flygirl wannabe chapter 7 . 1/9/2010 Okay, so there's nothing like a long drive to wake up the muses! Currently, I'm about 5,0 words into a sequel, but before I post anything, I need to revamp some of More Than Bargained For. Hopefully, I can correct my many grammatical errors and make the two stories flow together a little better. Be on the look out! Flygirl wannabe |
| cdfuller21 chapter 7 . 10/28/2009 I think you really need to update this story soon! Its very interesting and I want to know what happens next! Get busy writing please! |
| Liat1989 chapter 7 . 9/8/2009 Oh so Nigel is coming back for Ziva! I think u should just keep adding chapters to this story. The story hasn't really ended so a sequel wouldn't make sense. |
| dumdedumdum chapter 7 . 9/8/2009 LOVE IT :) |
