This is an excellent story. Author, you really made my day! I think this episode should be added to original A-Team series. Thank you.

Wow. This is really good! I love your writing style and you do sex very well. Haha. One tiny little thing...Murdock in jeans?

this... is perfection.

This is awesome, I would love it if you could write more for either Kelly & Murdock or for Amy & Murdock. There just isn't eneough of either of these couples and you've done one of the best K/M stories that I've seen.

How in the hell I missed this? I love Murdock/Kelly, it's a pity there are not so many stories about them. This one is powerful and delicate at the same time, and I'm amazed that you menaged to write sex with Murdock keeping him in character. Love the idea of making him Kelly's first(if I understood correctly, since I'm italian I'm always afraid I'm missing something...), I think it adds to her character.

And now, I have to wake up my husband 'cause I need him...since my son is still napping...

*sits with mouth dropped* Incredible...

Holy sweet mother...*fans self and tries to catch breath* This was just...in the words of Murdock, "Nnnhnn," *drools all over self*

That was truly amazing. Truly. Very nicely written and so in character that I could see it all happening in my mind (and I gotta tell ya...I LIKED what I saw! *winkwink*)

Very good job! Very very good job! Now excuse me...I need to go jump in an ice bath...

It might be you by stephen bishop began playoing when i read this...then every breath you take by the police... sappy,sweet,love songs just happen on when i read this...awwwwwww...love me some murdock luvins...very good...keep em cummin,luv...

All I can say is... Wow, this story is amazing.

Lovely, tasteful and romantic. Why I'd not read this before, I don't know. But it's beautiful and perfectly in character.

For some reason I was thinking khakis too.

And I, too, shall need a cold shower. :)

Wow. That was *beyond* tasteful... in a good way! ) That was darn good descriptive reading and uhh, I second the cold shower. Thanks for reminding me I still have a libido!

Uh... oh... uhm.

I think I need a rather cool shower right now.

Wow... that was amazing. When I read "tasteful adult content" in connection with "Murdock", I was a little sceptic. And my god, my hands are still shaking after reading. Honestly. How did you do that?

I couldn't imagine reading adult content around Murdock while him still being himself, and here you managed absolutely perfectly.

Wow.

Uhm.

Just one teeny, little thingie: Her eyes shone in the moonlight, not shined. And maybe use the word cap instead of hat. But otherwise...

Uhm. About that cold shower...

Wow, I REALLY enjoyed this. The diction and structure of your dialogue is particularly fantastic: it's got this lovely, disjointed flow that struck me as very true to life. And it's a super-hot scene, while still being really tasteful. I only have two really dinky criticisms. First, you've got Murdock wearing jeans. I only remember him wearing jeans a few times for scams on the show, but never for regular life. Always khakis! My only other note is that 'why you gotta do me like that?' is an exceptionally modern expression; I think it plays like an anachronism. But those two things aside, this truly is incredibly strong writing. You've expertly balanced the endearing, child-like sweetness of Murdock with Murdock the sexual being. For the love of God, write more stories! Congrats!