Okay, so I didn’t review every chapter but hopefully this longer one will make up for it. First of all, thank you: your effort and time is so evident in every chapter of this story. Your writing is captivating and I sped through this in a day and half and am getting ready to re-read.

I really feel the storyline took such an important turn, when your characters learned how to empower themselves. As someone who has/had an ED, the way you wrote about it was refreshing. It wasn’t glamorised, the way a lot of portrayals can be. I saw many parallels/nods to the OG Twilight plot too, and the way you wove those into your own work was fantastic.

Your Edward is the kind of guy we all hope to find, to be honest. I found your characterisation of him endearing, but none of your characters are perfect - they all have their flaws and own up to them, which makes your world even more engaging and relatable. The build up and pace was phenomenal and honestly
I’m just grateful to have found such a good fic at this time because let’s be honest, we all need some distraction right now.

I’m looking forward to my re-read and then whatever else you’ve written.
-CH

I really like your story but I just can’t help commenting— your descriptions of Bella’s size feel super inaccurate for a girl so deep into an eating disorder. I’m about Bella’s height and I weigh 100, 105 pounds. I wear size 0 jeans. I am in no way bulimic or anorexic. My ribs don’t stick out and I’m definitely not all skin and bones. I have a healthy BMI and my doctors never show concern over my weight or appearance. Honestly, I think, if Bella did have an eating disorder, she would wear smaller clothes sizes.

Obviously, this is fiction and, again, I love reading this story. If this is based off of your own experiences, I deeply apologize for this criticism. What Bella is doing is wrong, and I get that you’re trying to emphasize that wrongness by making her body seem abnormal and in need of more nourishment. I suppose it’s gotten to me because it feels as though you’re describing my body type as gross and unnatural. To any girls my size out there who might read this and feel insecure or something, I just want to comment that, as long as you’re eating well, you can be perfectly normal and healthy at this size.

I just wanted to let you know that every year or so I reread this and it touches me all over again. Such a beautiful work thank you for this gift!

I'm definitely one of those assholes that think people who have eating disorders are just fucking idiots. Why the fuck you think looking like a skeleton is attractive I don't fucking know. Now, how the fuck do I read this story when I have no respect for the main character seeing as this is a story where she's the protagonist?

I have read both of your complete long stories and in both, Bella makes a decision that breaks edward's heart And everything is completely fine when she finally decides she wants to be with him. Not even angry words from Edward.

This was an amazing story! Loved every second even though just about everyone pissed me off at some point!

Bella is the most selfish, annoying creature on the planet. Your writing is beautiful, anazing but I hate her.

Reread this one because I just love the journey and the growth and ahhh!

I bet it was a miscarriage.

GIVE ME AN EDWARD~~I know it's not Christmas but ya know, please?

I can’t write for shit
But I hope I can get this bit
Because when Im Blue
I just think of the things you do
Thank you Bella
For letting me Love you

This is what I thought when Bella said she couldn't write for shit ;P

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Lol, I think that more 17 year olds are virgins than aren’t in the world today. You believe the newspapers too much.

shes a selfish cunt bella is. i hate her. i always have. edward desveres better than her. she uses him. she deserves to die

I have read and loved several stories in the time I have been in fanfiction, but u don't know if any of them has affected me the way this story did, my god I cried. This story is amazing and I have never read anything like it. I honestly believe that if you changed the names of these characters and published you would have a best seller on you hands. For anyone reading this review when trying to decide whether to read this story or not, hit he back button and just read because it will shake you to your very core, you WILL cry, and you WILL laugh and you will fall in love with Edward and Bella,. You will break with them and heal with them and the story will never truly leave you. To the author; holy shit. You have so much talent it's unbelievable. This story is hear wrenching and perfect and I love it so damn much. Thank you for this story, it has helped me come to terms with myself. Thank you so much for giving us this piece of your soul as I have never experienced anything like it.
-J