I like this! Wish you had carried on

In my opinion, all three Dursley's deserve an exceptionally long term of equal work as poor Harry under the exact same conditions. And add good ol' Fumblemort to that as well. There simply is no way that old fraud is any shade of light! At the very least he's as dark as Riddle.

No, its Skeeter

Thank you for saying crap and not something more, erm, explicit. Why does nobody else do that?

its hagrid or Snape!

Please update your story soon!

Interesting... I'm favoriting this. I look forward to more if you ever choose to continue it...

I can't stop laughing. A boomslang is an actual snake! And...
Boom: tree
Slang:snake
They are literally just tree snakes. Completely harmless.

No, it' R.

this should be funny, snape :) smirk

AWESOME story! Love it!

It may be the the first chapter but I have a feeling this is going to be a good story

The proper spelling is Skeeter, though i can see the confusion. :)

Awesome!~~~

Hiya. I know this story hasn't been updated in years, and you probably haven't been online in quite a while (though I don't know for sure). I couldn't get rid of the nagging urge to review this story even though this comment is very late. So i'll just list my review of the story now (sorry about the heavy critique, i'm a bit fond of snakes so I study them every chance I get):
-Female Boomslang are usually brown or light green (males more of the latter, with black or blue scale edges) not silver.
-The fastest snake in the world is the Black Mamba.
-Boomslang venom, while deadly, is slow to take effect and often doesn't show symptoms for hours.
-Boomslang's are only found in sub-Saharan Africa. Britain snakes are scarcely venomous and the only real dangerous snake is the British Adder, which is rare to encounter in itself. Also, Boomslang in another language and means Tree Snake, so they wouldn't normally be found in bushes, etc.
-It's fangs are in the back of its jaws, not front.

Okay I think that's it. Anyway, if this story is ever continued, I suggest you might do more research on snake behavior (it's very important when writing a snake's personality because snakes have very... peculiar instincts).
I know the idea of rewriting mistakes such as the several facts I listed above is not an enthusiastically entertained idea, so one would find it easier to create a more in-depth history or reason as to why the character was doing things a normal snake wouldn't do (though Persephone isn't a normal one, she's still a snake and should have the instincts of one), like being in Britain when Persephones' species isn't found there. Maybe a reason she's silver instead of the regular colour. Anyway, you don't have to do any of this, as it's just my suggestion. This is a fanfiction website after all, so anything can happen. Just had to get this off my chest, so I didn't mean to offend if I ever did.
-Anonymousssnake