Reviews for You Belong With Me |
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Ghostwriter chapter 7 . 8/9/2009 Cool. Catch ya on the flip side. |
missshay16 chapter 6 . 7/16/2009 i love the story. continue updating |
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 6 . 7/16/2009 yeah, he broke up with brooke, i hope she wakes up soon, update soon |
Mela18 chapter 3 . 7/13/2009 Good job |
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 4 . 6/23/2009 omg, can't wait to see what happens, update soon |
lalez chapter 4 . 6/23/2009 okay well i don't wanna rain on your parade but i am starting again with some minor mistakes i saw 1)The light turned green and my dad lightly stepped on the gas when suddenly they were hit on the passenger side it is supossed to be Peytons POV so they makes no sense here you meant we right? 2)an unconscious person doesn't speak you probably meant her breathing gets shallower okay overall i liked the chapter and I know I make mistakes too but I try to help when I can :) I really hope Peyton is going to be okay and I am kind of happy that Luke admitted how he feels keep going and please don't be mad at me for always pointing out your mistakes :) |
Suze18 chapter 3 . 6/13/2009 I'm eager to know what he has up his sleeve. Hope she doesn't just let him get away with it too easily though! |
lalez chapter 3 . 6/13/2009 hope you can get really out of block ... oh luke had a meeting with withey ? why didn't he mention this in his mail? anyways good job keep going |
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 3 . 6/12/2009 can't wait to see what he does for her, also i want to see him realize that he cares more for her then just a friend. update soon |
LEYTONALWAYS chapter 3 . 6/12/2009 I hope it big whatever he planned because, he has been a really dick to her. Peyton deserves better than him. |
lalez chapter 2 . 6/8/2009 okay that guy is officially brain dead what is he thinking? standing a friend up is so not right (and twice a day ...) arrgh keep going good job |
Kaily119 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009 interesting... update soon, I wanna know what happens :) |
biyo chapter 2 . 6/5/2009 I'm starting to like this :) please ud soon! I wanna know more about LP's friendship and relationship :) |
Suze18 chapter 2 . 6/5/2009 I'm loving this story so far, but not liking Lucas. I don't like the fact Lucas has broken promises due to his girlfriend. Great job! |
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 2 . 6/4/2009 omg, i hate brooke in this, second time in one day he stands peyt up. i can't wait for the real drama to begin. update soon |