You said that you wanted to develop their relationship slowly, but ...that was advancing pretty quickly. I mean, second day and they're already to the point of questioning why they feel what they feel?

i dont get it.. why was she sooooo upset about having 25% synchronization lvl... when she had just discovered the whole.. 'Black Order and innocence' stuff.

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Ah. . . She passed out in the middle of a battle again, it's really a wonder that she's not dead yet. It's also frustrating how it keeps on happening. I am not sure if I misunderstood something along the way but, she performs well during the spars with Kanda. But when it comes to the actual battles, she becomes pretty much useless. . . You've been pretty harsh on her, dear author. It's like all her hardwork is for the past chapters were for naught.

Wow. Wow! I created an account just so I could follow this fic. I love it so much and envy your writing skills. Rue is an amazing character. Anyone who even thinks of calling her a Mary Sue is clearly an idiot. The only nitpick I have is that the characters are a bit OOC for the first half. I must say, though, the characterization has gotten better since you got into the canon parts.

I'm so looking forward to reading more of this! I hope you update soon!

Love your story now following! . Please update soon!

This is so awesome,original,and inspirering!It's not often that people write an oc that takes death the way Rue does,it's a nice change. I know this is a fanfic but I've come to love it like an actually published book.I'm an aspiring manga auther and this provided loads of inspiration for the chapter when they all dog-piled,I was reading and starting to think "Rue's straddling Lavi",then I actually read that part and I went"YES!Rue IS straddling Lavi". I've loved the funny moments(especially Kanda's)and everything else just hit me so hard in the feels.I've cried over Unravel and I don't cry easily .I'm looking forward to the next vhapter whenever you may post and I'm going to read the :Secret Files too;know you have a loving fan.I don't have any sort of acount so I can't send it to you but I'm going to draw a picture of Rue ,based on your only recent falt I can find is that you didn't describe Kei's appearance;other than that I love it.

Thank you for updating I absolutely LOVE your story!

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did you give up on this story?... i really love this lavi story, i cant find anything that comes close to this. i hope everything's alright on your end.

I've just re read your story and I didn't think it even possible, but I fell in love even more. I really miss your updates, I understand life gets in the way buuuuut if you ever feel like updating again I'll be waiting as well as all the other peeps over here on fanfiction. I'd like to see Rue and Lavi's story to the end :)

soooo... still waiting for that update ._.

omg please update soon again, i can't go on with a cliff hanger!

So dramatic am cool another character! Loving it so many twists within the plot can't wait till the next one. Although one question isn't one of the survivors from the ship named kei? Just curious

This was sad...