great to think she was always there for will, i think the darker version could be true, great fic

I can see this being a part of his history, it was well written, in chracter and brilliant. Well done.

Loved the ending reply to the list... overall a sweet story from Will's past. I wish we knew more about his past from the series, but till then we shall imagine what we will.

Heh-the mental imagery alone was fascinating :P I love darkness and angst in characters. It adds so much more depth and makes any fluff written a lot more worthwhile! I loved the rules, and yay for guardian angels!

Nicely done! Enjoyed it!

Bloody BRILLIANT! I particularly liked the end, with the notes.

Very nice ... feels right, natural ... can actually see this having happened. Makes for a great backstory. Really enjoyed it.

This was really sweet, and really plausible, thank you. You do very good voices for the Sanctuary-verse.

I loved it!

AHH. This was SO good. I got shivers at the end. And this is a view of Will I've never used before, but I totally buy. It actually makes who he is now even more significant. But this whole concept is just. MAN. SO AWESOME. Shivers, I tell you.