Reviews for The Consequences of a Ritual Loss |
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Tenshimeowmanga chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 This was a great story! As soon as I was in the know of Kakashi shooting his load into Kawari, I was like, Oh shit, She/He's preggers now! This story was really good! |
KyuRyu chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Three years later-Kakashi wants another kid, Naruto still refuses to do it again and has for the past year every time its brought up. Kakashi sneakily learns the henge technique and decideds to carry himself. But, oh no! Twins!. Typically Naruto-esque chaos ensues. |
era-romance chapter 1 . 12/11/2018 great story. while a sequel is unnessary more stories like this one would be awesome. yay narukashi! |
FlowersBite chapter 1 . 11/7/2018 lovely story, it felt kind of unfinished but it was well developed and I truly liked it. |
CarnationDaydreamer chapter 1 . 11/23/2014 I loved this story. It was really cute. I loved how you bashed sakura into oblivion. Good she is a bitch. Anyway CIAO XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 Sequel please |
Dragon's Flame of Life chapter 1 . 8/20/2014 Loved this story! It was awesome. |
bookworm2192 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014 Very good! I absolutely loved this story, and I have read all but one of your other stories, which were all fabulous as well. Nice job! |
narukeforever2639 chapter 1 . 7/11/2014 best story ever read like a million times already keep making awesome stories |
Shae Vizla chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 Good story? It's agood think Kakashi and Naruto found each others and the fact the henge form can be pregnant helped them to ciment their bond and allowed them to have a child gay couple couldn't have normally. Naruto is afraid of the way people will see her son but she realized he had very good friends ready to protect him (and I think the Council will be happy to have a heir to the Hatake clan). Sakura is really a bitch and keep a civilian mentality that willbe her downfall if she didn't grow up. |
Moonttje chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 Whahaha i laughed soo hard and it was soo niceti read,.. I really really liked it,.. Soo arigato for writing this! |
Fairy of Sakuras chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 I thought this was a great story... It was so funny. |
chibihinachan chapter 1 . 2/22/2013 sigh...ok I'm really really sorry to say this, cuz I read your other work Demon Bonds and really enjoyed it, but I could not finish this story no matter how hard I tried. I really really tried, but the Sakura bashing became too much of a focal point for me and really detracted from the story. I'm sorry, but this story gets a thumbs down for me. |
Butterfly1993 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013 Loved it XD |
Red Blood Moon chapter 1 . 1/31/2013 I love the plot and wish I was a good as a writer you are. |