that was good

u so have to get chapter 9 up. I just read these 8 chapters and i'm totally hating the cliffy right now! what do you mean Dimitri's awake? Does he stil love Rose? Ohmigod This is going to be so hard to wait :'(

Omigod I have been wanting to read this book 4ever and i never seem to get around to the book store. This'll push now :)

you need to wright another chapter

yay

Been reading your past 8 chapters. I like how you've slightly adopted Mead's style of writing.

I don't know when your next chapter is coming out because it'd be good fun to keep up to track on your story too.

I just started reading this series a while ago and need to go to the library to get Blood Promise. But your version definitely seems promising. I say, go on with it :) .

love it, love it, love it and also got some ideas for the rest of the story,... you should make Dimka forget about Roza and make Roza greive and yern for him and make her talk to Dimka and try to make him remember, but he dosent believe her and leaves her with a broken heart, but soon after hes asleep and Adrian visits Dimka in his dreams and says to Dimka that he left Roza heart broken and that they were together and Dimka soon after goes to look for Rosa by talking to her mother and she says that she couldn't live without him and that she was doing something unthinkable that that was all she said to her and he still looks for her, but soon finds her trying to kill herself by going to a strigoi place but he catches her but she rejects him but he told her everything and she believed him and then they go back to tell everyone that thier leaving so that they could be together but find out that Lissa has something wrong with her and that shes gone mental or crazy... thats just an idea of mine you can use it i would love to see this as the end of the story, keep it up love your words, Jasha Maroi.

here iam...again!ok,tell the truth!you have chapter 9?so,give it to me!

omg!what's going on now?iwon't sleep if i don't read chapter 8

YOY ARE THE BEST!i don't know how you do that,just keep do it!

ARE YOU KIDDING ME!I HAVE READ SO MANY BOOKS BYT I HAVE NEVER FELT MY HEART STOPS BEATING!I NEAD CGAPTER 6 NOW!I MEAN IT!

Good evening.

How are you?

I have read your story and love it to bits.

I hope you continue to keep writing.

I'm new to fanfiction and just wondering if you have read my story?

If not please give it a try and comment me what you think!

I'll give you the link.

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With every chapter you review you receive a teaser of the following chapter to come.

Thanks for your support!

:)

Omg what? dont't stop! please write the next chapter soon, aww I hope dimitri still wants her.

you have a very nice story that you wrote. have a nice day now.

well i was reading this nd it is really good..i have not gotten the book blood promise yet either and it is driving me crazii bc i want to know whats going to happen with demitri..but what your writing is really good and very interesting and since i havent gotten it yet is fun to read and see what you think and want to happen with it all and i really like how you choose to have demitri come back and also lissa nd christian adrian nd also her mother..i really like it all.