No lo voy a escribir en tu idioma, ¡pero puta!, esto esta incompleto desde hace casi una decada. Es tiempo que te muevas o por lo menos me digas cual es la continuacion de esto, porque me carcome la curiosidad.

NOOOOOOO! I can't believe I read this when I knew it hasn't been updated since 2012 so most likely it never will be since it's probably been abandoned, put on hiatus, or simply forgotten by the author but it sounded interesting and when I started reading I got hooked and wanted to see where it would go but Ive reached the last available chapter and now I'm just going to die in agony and suspense and somewhat regret but more like resignation since I knew what I was getting into but still!

The angst was done so well- I cried; yep. Had quite a few tears and snot happening, especially right near the end there with Iruka and Naruto's old goggles. Also, the writing flows nicely, the plot is mysterious and kept at a good pace to uncover, and the characters are believable.
I love how you gave the bits about the 'Rookie 12' and how they changed either from Naruto's influence or because of his death.
The part with Jiraiya telling Tsunade of his new information and their discussion after was kind of awkward, especially Tsunade's dialogue and the humor or 'funny part' seemed misplaced and not carried out well, to me at least.
Umm, that's all I can think of and feel like writing since I'd already vented out my sadness and frustration at the beginning -sorry bout that. u_u; - sooo yeah...
I'll just leave with saying: Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Take care and have fun!

Your so called amigos are getting annoyed waiting for the kicked off update

Where are you!? I know I'm being selfish ._. But why aren't you updating !? I have waited long enough...well actualy this is my first time reading this and I love it! Please update and don't give up on this story. I need you Author San ...I mean I don't need you as in physically cause that be wierd since this is my first time reviewing ,but I need you ...to update :)

Sincerely, Selfish girl who still waits for an update.

What happened!?

Hey what happend?! Continue! You had so many reivews and you leave us hanging...what's up with that?

cuando continuas esta re buena la historia cuando la continuas tengo algunas conclusiones de donde estaba naruto

dun dun dunn cant wait for the next chapter

unfair! when's the next update?

looks like an interesting story and i think i see where this is going. i am looking forwaed to the next chapter

Is Naruto really dead? If so, who really killed him?! So many questions!

U NO UPDATE?

great story

Omigod... best...freaking..story...OF ALL TIME!

Please, please update! If you do i will give you all of my digital cookies!

I Love this Fanfiction! is Naruto really dead? or is he that cloaked figure? Dun dun duuunnnn!