| Reviews for Closure |
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   Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 12/4/2017 Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read |
| Spitfire303 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 This is amazing |
| JoannaG93 chapter 1 . 12/14/2013 An amazing story! Loved every part of it. |
| onewritergirl93 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013 I love love love this! I am so glad that there was a follow up to the Chocolate story! I hope it happens exactly like the someday SOON! |
| Dr. Jane Yue chapter 1 . 3/23/2013 Oh beautifull! Well done! Really awesome! Great! |
| wavesofred chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 3 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 She thinks she is going to die. She honestly thinks he would let her die just so he can have his revenge. She has no idea how much she means to him, does she? Lisbon, I think I finally got it." His voice is filled with suppressed joy, so much that Lisbon starts to cautiously smile back. "Got what?" "Closure," he replies. And then he kisses her. wow so good |
| stxrdusty chapter 1 . 10/7/2012 Yay! Cuteness! Loved it! :D |
| chymom chapter 1 . 1/22/2012 Interesting. With the way you wrote this I could see it as if it were on TV. Great job! Do you have more? |
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 9/25/2011 Perfect! I wish something like this had actually happened in the premiere...but, alas, it didn't. :( |
| Midori Yuki chapter 1 . 1/4/2011 aww! that was awesome! I loved it~ |
| Trinityblade chapter 1 . 11/12/2010 I've now read three of your Mentalist stories, because I loved the first one I read so much. I don't often review, but when I come across something amazing, I have to let that person know. So, kudos to you. Thank you, and continue your awe-inspiring work. |
| 13 Jo chapter 1 . 11/3/2010 Intense. Your style of writing fit the situation well. The occasional mention of his heartbeat, the wavering of his decision.. they were all written well. And I loved the reactions of Lisbon, fear... shock... love and guilt. And I loved it when you wrote that he should be starting to call his wife ex-wife, which I think, could be the turning point of Jane's whole post-RJ life in the show as well, the acceptance that it is indeed ex-wife. So, very well done. I hope you write more! |
| Erudit chapter 1 . 8/9/2010 This was great! I loved it. |
| SoRightItsWrong chapter 1 . 7/19/2010 This was so lovely and very well written. Honestly, this is almost how I see it happening in the show. I think the writers are building up to this. And whether or not they mean it to be romantic, one day Jane will have to choose between Lisbon and Red John. Of course, it will be at the end of the series because once Red John is dead the point of the series is kind of over. Getting back to the story, amazing writing. I loved your portrayal of the characters and the little details. -Kat |
