It's good that Asuka realized her life doesn't have to revolve around Juudai and she can find her own path without him being there. And she'll have to. She can grow up in her own way and not be worried about if she's "good enough" for him, and find a life that is her own, not overshadowed by someone else. She can be the independent person she's always wanted to be, instead of his lackey. Good for her!

BWAH! Poor Asuka! This fanfic just makes me wanna cry *sniffle*. Good *sniffle* story, WC *sniffle*. Aw.T.T BWAH!

at then end it shouldve said but in the end judai chose her

This is so true, an accurate description of why I think Asuka left the DA during season 3. That had to be the only reason and you captured that really well. Good Job.

This is so sad. I felt tears pricking at the corners of my eyes while reading this, but I have to ask. Did Alexis comit suicide, or just metiforically let go of the rope? I wasn't quite sure of that. Anyways, this is really good.